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42.5 points
I'm very happy with how this turned out. *pats self on back*
Photo Quality: 5/5
Photo Presentation: 4.5/5
Model Appearance: 8/10
Creativity: 9/10
Romantic: 11/15
Requirements: 5/5
Total: 42.5/50
Cute! I like the idea here and I think it is a very well-made advertisement. This was a tough assignment to make look romantic or sexy and you did a little of the softer side sex appeal here. I think some more makeup and a better pose might have showed more of her sexy nature. I like the use of the words and the placements were all nicely done. Good work.
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I'm quite pleased with the comments I got for this. I wasn't sure if I should use more makeup with it being shower pic and all, but I agree the pose could of been sexier. I couldn't download any new poses when I did this pic. My virus protection needed to be renew and well uploading sites like mediafire aren't the safest sites to go to, so I went cold turkey on downloading cc. I had to use what I had already. I'm surprise it turned out so well.
I had even planned to download a cc towel and head wrap, but like I said I was unable to do that. So I got all clever like and used the towel from a hot tub interaction. I had her skinny dip in the hot tub and had another sim take her clothes. Then when she got out, she automatically changed into a towel. The towel isn't in CAS, so it seems to oddly only show up when you do this. Worked out quite well for me though. I was a little surprise.
The rest is editing, editing, editing. The lighting, the water, the writing, the product placement, and I fixed one her fingers as it looked a bit wonky. In the midst of this I updated paint.net and had to put some of my plugins back (Yes I broke my rule of no downloading for this, but no viruses thank goodness). Once I got some of those back I was able to edit to my liking. The updated version seems to make my pics look clearer now. Hmmmm...
The next assignment is a b&w nude shot from the thighs up with dramatic lighting. It also has to be from the side with her face showing. Yeah it's a lot, but I have some ideas for it already and possible poses. Wish me luck. :)
P.S. I renewed virus protection yesterday and went a little crazy downloading stuff. I couldn't help myself. >_<
It's a good picture - very like a real advert. I think that towel is fine, I don't think a CC one would have been much better (unless there are some amazing CC bathtowels out there that I've just never seen lol)
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