4th Place (Tied) with 91.5/100
Round 3- Sports
I happily take 4th on this one.
Amy
Creativity: 9/10
Pose & Styling: 9.5/10
Quality: 9/10
Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10
Overall Appearance: 9/10
TOTAL: 45.5/50
Comments: Whoa! Demetri looks stunning in his beachwear rocking his trunks. He looks like he’s getting ready to do a mean spike! Everyone better watch out. I love his pose and his look. I also like that you were able to include an accessory being that he has a minimal clothing. I like how we can still see his eyes through the sunglasses, haha. Nice touch. *For me, the background is the only thing that I feel could be improved. Demetri looks fabulous, but the background has a couple things I noticed: there are some blur lines along the volleyball pole and the outer water/shoreline (to the right of Demetri/behind his hand area) & the pole appears to be floating rather than being in the ground. *Volleyball nets are usually placed running parallel along beaches in the opposite direction of the water so the balls aren’t hit directly into the water (or they are in my area at least); so the net does appear to have a misplaced feel to me. Other than that this shot is fantastic. I think this was a very creative sport choice, and you did a wonderful job, nicely done!
Jillie
Creativity: 9/10
Pose & Styling: 9.5/10
Quality: 9.5/10
Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10
Overall Appearance: 9/10
TOTAL: 46/50
Comments: Hello our little ray of sunshine, by the looks of it you don't own many shirts --- not complaining, just an observation. Demetri is looking fine as always, and now we get to see that golden tanned skin isn't just from oil grease! Loving the beach volleyball selection; the background as awesome, and the lighting/light source on him is spot on! Took a bit of marks off from the shadow in the sand that I am assuming is for the net pole. Not sure if it is because the pole is in water, but the connection to the sand is a little iffy on where that's happening. I like the simplicity of the pose, but I do find it be just a little stiff or awkward in the left arm portion. Overall, love the shot and can't wait to see more of him!
Agh the stiff arm and net placement really bother me now. lol I knew the arm was stiff though after giving up on it in blender (yes I made the pose), but I really did not pay much attention to the placement of the net. I have no clue how most sports work. I just said "oooo here's a pretty scenery let's put it here!" xD
Anyway, this was not my first choice for sports. I wanted to do soccer, but someone did it before me. Then I stumbled upon the volleyball stuff and I settled on doing an in-game pic with them. I also was having trouble with reshade in the midst of this, which didn't help the pressure of getting it done. I forgot to edit the shadows with all the rushing.
There's very little editing to this pic though. Just fiddled with hues, contrast, and highlighting the abs.😜
The next assignment was to model some urban/street wear in an urban setting. I've done it already. I'm a little behind posting my pics here.
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