Monday, June 18, 2018

Sophisticated Man- A3 & Scores

3RD PLACE
Assignment 3-  Hats and Jackets
Model: Malcolm Payne
Still sexy in 3rd. Last min sexiness. Despite the minor mistakes, I like this pic.👍 



Jen
Wearing the given style of photographic fashion outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 5/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 9/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 9.5/10
Total: 43.5/45
Comments:  Love the whole effect of this one. He looks like some classy street guy that is tough and a leader who has a lot of followers. Adore your choice of background, but I could see him wearing a chain, earrings and even a ring, which would have added a few more points to the accessory score. I really like how you’ve used the jacket on one shoulder and that you can still see his eyes over his glasses. It would have been nice to have him engaging with the camera with his eyes.

Erin
Wearing the given style of photographic fashion outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 5/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 9/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 9/10
Total: 43/45
Comments: Great job this round with Malcolm! I love the background! One thing to take note of is that you cut off his fingers. You could have included them and met the 1/2 to 3/4 body shot requirement. I do think that this is one of my favorites of the round!

Kitty
Wearing the given style of photographic fashion outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 5/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 9/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 9/10
Total: 43/45
Comments: Wow Malcolm is looking good, I absolutely love his outfit, the way you have his jacket hanging on his shoulder is great. I think he may me a little too big comparing him to the train but maybe he's just a tall guy haha.

Ok, so my idea for this was to do more of a cool casual look with a hat and a jacket. I wanted him to rock that hat and have the jacket as more of an accessory. Thought I was risking it with the jacket, but it worked. Now I was having trouble finding a good background, so I did end up improvising a bit. I also was doing this last min, so I didn't have much time to improvise. Still, I like the photo. It has some proportion issues, but it's pretty clean, sharp, and cool looking.

The next assignment was to do a casual look on a runway background. Another casual look. Totally my fault, but ugh. I did it though and just got scores back for it. Just need to check in. xD 

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