Thursday, June 14, 2018

Sophisticated Style (Seasons) - A5 & Scores

3RD PLACE
A5- Spring Pants-A-Plenty
Model: Jasmine Lee
Not what I envisioned, but I got 3rd.



Jen
Wearing the given season's clothing outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 4/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 9/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 10/10
Total Points: 43/45 + 2 for early submission = 45
Comments: Jasmine looks gorgeous in her pink pants and floral top.  The pose is lovely and she looks like she has spring in her step after a long winter. Very nice. The accessories and makeup look wonderful along with the bag and her nails match nicely with her outfit. I adore this background and the composition is beautifully balanced. Her eyes look a little off, something about them, her left one looks a touch turned in too much. if she were looking directly at the camera this may have balanced that out a bit more.

Issabella
Wearing the given season's clothing outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 4/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 10/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 8/10
TOTAL: 42/45
Comments: Jasmine looks classy and sophisticated in this shot. The bright colors screams spring everywhere. Your pose is exciting. A little too much contrast in this shot. Using lighter filter could sort that out chop, chop. With that said, well done.

Erin
Wearing the given season's clothing outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 4/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 10/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google)10 /10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 9/10
Total Points: 43/45

Wanted to do something floral again and bold with lots of green, but I had to settle for something else. Still got the boldness I wanted with the pants, so I wasn't completely unhappy. Still looks good. Finding a background was the worse part really. I wanted a street/urban background, but I couldn't find anything that fit the assignment. So I literally just gave up and picked this. It's not bad, but nowhere near what I wanted. *sigh* Finding backgrounds is starting to be very frustrating and annoying. May have to go back to in-game settings soon.

Editing is minimum. Added shadows, which I'm starting to hate. The bike was added in with the flowers. That's it really.

The next assignment was to do a denim look. I'm late posting this, so I got scores for that already. That's next.

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