4TH PLACE (TIE)
Assignment 4 - Classy Casuals
Model: Malcolm Payne
Eh, not bad. Scored higher than I expected.
Wearing the given style of photographic fashion outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 4/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 10/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 8/10
Total: 42/45
Comments: Love Malcolm’s swagger down the catwalk and your choice of clothes were perfect for this round. You had just the right amount of accessories to set off the classy feel of this shot and his eye contact with the camera worked well as did the background. Your audience really looks like you are all they are looking at. Great round!
Erin
Wearing the given style of photographic fashion outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 5/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 10/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google) 10/10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 8/10
Total: 43/45
Comments: Malcolm looks awesome. He looks very classy and I like his outfit. There are some jagged edges on the pants and it's a little blurry around the sweater sleeves and the shoes. Otherwise this is one of my favorites of the round. Great job!
Kitty
Wearing the given style of photographic fashion outlined in the brief 10/10
Accessories that enhance your outfits plus those specified in the brief 5/5
Most classy and sophisticated appeal 10/10
Relevant background (this can be in-game or google)9 /10
Editing and proportion (this includes lighting and filters) 8/10
Total: 42/45
Comments: This shot of Malcolm looks great, I think is outfit is very sophisticated and classy. He definitely looks good on the runway though I do wish it was more of an actual runway. The real people are bothering me a little, I think Malcolm looks odd against them, maybe you could have blurred them a little more but I really like what you did here!
*sings* I need better time management...
Slightly last min pic that didn't go my way is the story again. This time it's not bad. Just ok. Finding a runway background was the worst. I seriously couldn't find one that didn't have a model in the way or wasn't lacking size wise. Then when I found one I end up trashing it as it was blurry as f***! So I ended up with this one and groaned at how my outfit matched it. Didn't have time to go back and make an outfit change, so I stuck with this. As for those styling choices, this was not apart of my original idea. I wanted a fitted button-up shirt. Couldn't find one that was exactly fitted or fitting for my model, so I just threw this together. Blah. It's ok, but meh.
Next assignment was to show my model all sophisticated-like with jeans. I did it the other day last minute. xD I almost dropped, but I decided to stop 2nd guessing myself and just go with my original idea. A bit of risk, but I think I pulled it off. Hopefully, the judges like it. I like it. It probably has some mistakes somewhere that I overlooked, but I think it's a good edit. We'll see.
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